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Sara Lucas
12/5/2015 10:12:40 pm
Good job! I enjoyed reading your paper. One thing I suggest is that you consider combining the data analysis section and conclusion. When I read your analysis section I really wanted to know the results. Then when I got to the conclusion section you restated how you analyzed some of your data. It just seemed to be a little redundant.
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Tristan
12/5/2015 10:52:12 pm
I agree with the redundant comment you made. I noticed that as well but by that point I was just done and figured I would change it before the final draft. Thanks for the comments and the things you noticed to edit. I think it would have turned out differently had I had more time to build better relationships with my students. The flipped classroom is something I have been wanting to try since I started my masters but didn't have the time or didn't make time, so I figured this would be a great way to see how it went.
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Peter Johnsen
12/6/2015 02:33:11 pm
Very interesting read. I was worried that this would be a tedious task. However, a genuinely enjoyed reading your paper and was eagerly anticipating your results and conclusions. For that reason, I feel as if you could combine your data analysis and results together or at least give me some results a little earlier on. You got me hooked and I was really wanted to know what you found out.
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Tristan
12/6/2015 05:38:05 pm
Thanks for your feeback, I was surprised to see comments from you because you weren't listed as a critical friend, so thanks for still reading it and giving me your thoughts. Like Sara and Sarah mentioned about the analysis and results getting combined, you did as well, so I will be looking into how I can do that and make it flow well.
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Sarah K
12/6/2015 03:59:32 pm
Tristan,
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Sarah K
12/6/2015 04:00:44 pm
Part 2:
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Tristan
12/6/2015 05:36:30 pm
I was just thinking this morning when I was reading someone's paper with the rubric how I didn't do that last part that you mentioned about not explaining them in my appendices. It would help the reader to know why the questions were chosen and they weren't just there by random chance.
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